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    Female Knight Pencil   (Date posted: 02/26/02 at 18:58:15) Quote Modify Delete



This picture is a character from the same world
as the armadillo armor guy (see 'Another Character Sketch' thread btw he's tentatively named Kaze) this character is in ornate armor unlike Kaze who has simpler sleeker armor.  She's a knight for the Royal family.  CC plz.


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    Re: Female Knight Pencil   (Date posted: 02/26/02 at 20:13:24) Quote Modify Delete

Okay, well, I know nothing about art, really, and if I did I still wouldn't have the heart to criticize anyone else's work...just one question...where is her bow? Just askin'...


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    Re: Female Knight Pencil   (Date posted: 02/26/02 at 21:53:50) Quote Modify Delete

lol i see your point.  It's behind the arrows but the scanner didn't pick up the pencil too well, so there's only a faint outline.  


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    Re: Female Knight Pencil   (Date posted: 02/27/02 at 03:04:27) Quote Modify Delete

Beautiful drawing... but there's something wrong with her chest. Also, her hands don't look right, not like i'm one to talk... ^^,


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    Re: Female Knight Pencil   (Date posted: 02/27/02 at 07:04:13) Quote Modify Delete

Verra cool, I really like the dragon motif on the armor and especially the hip-guards...[I'm a sucker for dragons and tigers...lol]...but the dragon above her left eye [as you face her] looks more like a heraldic lion...And the one on the [facing] right side of the neckpiece lacks detail...

The top-left corner of the axe-blade on the halberd: What happened? Is that an attatched bit, or maybe an odd perspective on the tip of the blade...? I can't tell what it's supposed to be...

Wings, wings, everywhere, wheee~~~! ^_^ But why on the boots? just curious...And her boots don't really go with the rest of her armor...Yeah, they're combat boots, which does make perfect sense for a warrior, but they make her seem less "feminine", cuz they look like guys' combat boots...hell, they look like MY boots, lol...maybe narrow the heels and the slenderize the overall shape just a tad...Ever played Lunar? The overall effect is Alex with Luna's skirt...0_0;...Maybe give her an Alex-type armored "skirt", it would complete the whole "dragon" - warrior look [pardon the pun]

ditto on the wierd hands

Wouldn't the shoulder pads [pauldrons??] with the hanging thingies get in the way of her archery...? Tho i must admit, I haven't often seen the notion of a heavy-melee character who doubles as an archer before...Interesting [read: "Nice"] concept...^_^




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    Re: Female Knight Pencil   (Date posted: 02/27/02 at 16:11:47) Quote Modify Delete

Ack i noticed the hand as I was posting.  *berrates himself* baka baka baka!  anyway I usually don't put designs on the armor because frankly i'm not good at making the designs.  I did the winged boots because I was watching CCS and thought, why not?  


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    Re: Female Knight Pencil   (Date posted: 02/28/02 at 05:47:57) Quote Modify Delete

Actually , as I said, I liked the dragon design, it's just those 2 instances which were a tad off, and that's easily fixed ^_^

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    Re: Female Knight Pencil   (Date posted: 02/28/02 at 11:24:58) Quote Modify Delete

her left b00b looks to low and/or to big =/ everything else has already been said, good job! ^_^


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    Re: Female Knight Pencil   (Date posted: 02/28/02 at 12:19:34) Quote Modify Delete

The belts on her waist... buckles don't look just like that. You may want to give a real belt buckle a closer look, or go to polykarbon.com and look at the belts there...


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    Re: Female Knight Pencil   (Date posted: 02/28/02 at 17:26:10) Quote Modify Delete

YOU! ....you go to polykarbon...then why do i never see u there? =/ WAIT! i rememeber seeing a post by you now...in the japanese language section ^_^


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    Re: Female Knight Pencil   (Date posted: 02/28/02 at 17:31:09) Quote Modify Delete

I like polykarbon because when you post on those boards you get fantastic reviews from artists not as good as you, and the professional artists can really critique your work well.

Alll in all it' leaves me with a boosted ego and a better picture... very rare for art boards. ^_-


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"Setsuna tsu kaita"-Segata Sanshiro

"who's been in my mayonnaise? I know there was more than this in the jar. How many times do I have to tell you people to leave my mayonnaise alone!?-Clint Eastwood, after opening his personal refrigerator

"Sorry Rajiv, but the asylum members are in another channel"-Me

"I HAS THE TAPE!"- Kaa Lee

"And now I leave you to your.... umm... Your moosy fate! MWAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!"-Zim, from invader Zim (commenting on his plot to send someone to a... room with a moose)

"You're really one of the only people who can appreciate that Amaaazingness of this plan"-Zim, from Invader Zim

"Life is like a poem, you give and take"- Guy on Goth site

"HOW THE HELL IS THAT LIKE A POEM!?"-Masterninja.com

"What do you get when you kiss a girl? You get enough germs to catch pneumonia And after that... she'll never phone ya"- Burt Bacharach

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    Re: Female Knight Pencil   (Date posted: 03/01/02 at 09:52:09) Quote Modify Delete

Looks good!

I think a good way to fix HER left hand (not ours) is to put her hand behind the cross-strips b/c it doesn't even seem like she has a good handle on the shield in the first place...

With all else mentioned, it's better than anything I could ever spit out, so congrats!



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    Re: Female Knight Pencil   (Date posted: 03/01/02 at 09:58:13) Quote Modify Delete

The hands looks slightly too small for the body. Only slightly. I think that's why the hand holding the shield seems odd. It needs to be a little bigger.

Also the hand holding the pole-axe isin't positioned right for where her forearm is. It needs to rotats slightly and show more fingers. It kind of looks like she has a flexible, wrap-around palm right now. If you make the lines a little longer separating her fingers, add a knucle to define where her digits meet her meta-carpals, and bring her fingers to an end it would be perfect.

Aside from the hands, That drawing is really really good and I can't find any problems with it.
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    Re: Female Knight Pencil   (Date posted: 03/01/02 at 16:38:40) Quote Modify Delete

ditto on the hands (that's one of everyone's trouble spots). You put some amazing detail on this one. IMO, they help bring the piece to life. It may just be the fact that the pic is too long to fit without scrolling, but I think you could give her a better sense of balance- thus fixing whatever problems there may be with her chest and the way she/her head is leaning.


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    Re: Female Knight Pencil   (Date posted: 03/01/02 at 16:48:06) Quote Modify Delete

Changed your resolution Turin, She fits onto my screen perfectly... ^^,


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"Setsuna tsu kaita"-Segata Sanshiro

"who's been in my mayonnaise? I know there was more than this in the jar. How many times do I have to tell you people to leave my mayonnaise alone!?-Clint Eastwood, after opening his personal refrigerator

"Sorry Rajiv, but the asylum members are in another channel"-Me

"I HAS THE TAPE!"- Kaa Lee

"And now I leave you to your.... umm... Your moosy fate! MWAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!"-Zim, from invader Zim (commenting on his plot to send someone to a... room with a moose)

"You're really one of the only people who can appreciate that Amaaazingness of this plan"-Zim, from Invader Zim

"Life is like a poem, you give and take"- Guy on Goth site

"HOW THE HELL IS THAT LIKE A POEM!?"-Masterninja.com

"What do you get when you kiss a girl? You get enough germs to catch pneumonia And after that... she'll never phone ya"- Burt Bacharach

"It's not easy to give a damn"- Rajiv

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